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This was adorable! 

I'll have to check out your other VN at some point, and I'm looking forward to the full version of this one! Vale and Lawrence definitely need to talk about their feelings.
(I loved how Lawrence's sister totally saw through everything, though 😂)

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Thank you so much for playing! That's such a fun thumbnail, I love it 🤭💕

They really do need to talk! (but one, they're both dummies, and two, where's the fun in that?) So I hope what I have in mind for them will be a bit more entertaining. ✨ (also, yes, Lawrence is not as sneaky as he'd like to think lol)

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Of course!
And thank you 😄Your VN had some fun images to use for it.

That's fair 😂A little miscommunication always makes for some fun drama! I'm looking forward to seeing how they finally resolve it.

PART 2 PLSSSSSS

my game wont load

Try running it in incognito/private mode or in a different browser, that usually helps 😊

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no chance a mobile friendly version, eh? it SO looks like our jam, too.

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Hi, thank you for the interest! The best I could do is an Android port, would that help? ^^

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Absolutely but... where?

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I've yet to build it! 😅 It might take a few days so feel free to check back later 🙏

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Oh, I had interpreted incirrectly that it was done. Thanks for the clairity.

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omg i feel for Lawrence so bad haha 

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awww! i wanna give L a big hug

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Hell yeah we are getting a bigger and better version!!!!!!

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so relatable...

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I NEED THE FULL VERSION BRO! But I can wait :)

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I can't wait for the full version!!

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This was amazing! Lovable characters I want to root for. I'm looking forward to seeing the full version in the future and seeing how this story ends ♥

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Thank you so much for playing, I'm happy you enjoyed my silly game  🫶
Sorry about the confusion, I didn't realize it could be a problem with just three characters in the scene 😅 i appreciate the critique, tho! i'll keep it in mind for the future ^^

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i would also like to play full game

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This game seems really coo-

A FULL VERSION IS HAPPENING????????? OKAY NOW I NEED IT 👁️👄👁️

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It is happening! I'll be posting updates here on the page so be sure to check back if you're interested. ^^

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Surprisingly good for a short game!  Must have more!

Count me in for the Full Game.  :D

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The gay panic was far too real and I WANT TO KNOW IF THEY WILL COME TOGETHER

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Thank you for playing! The full version is currently in the works! ^^

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oh man, the gay panic is too real lol. This was such a cute game!! <3 Definitely convinced me to play the main game. Hope to see more of these two dorks in the future!

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"cant even have a gay crisis in peace"my everyday life(i say while babystting my little brother and squealing over romance games)

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my name is iris and when i saw"why cant iris have the babies"i immediately said"because women."

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wow can't a guy have a gay crises in peace 😂

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this was great i loved playing it,, the animation were so swift and yummy to watch

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This game is sooo cute

GG

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it was so cute! I immediately ran to play your main game!!

Aww, thank you for playing! The main game is a bit darker but I hope you enjoy it, too! ✨

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Great job at capturing the tension in MC such a short time. Definitely made me smile =). Hoping for continuation!

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Cuties!! hopefully I see more of them, I'm feeling tempted to play the main game, but I think it's more action, and I'm lowkey not feeling action at the moment, maybe in a near future lool, who knows, either way good game! a bit sad it was short, but it was cute!! ^_^

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Aw, thank you for playing! I definitely want to do more with these two 😊

As for the main game, it's actually a fantasy/romance! There are some thriller elements, but the focus is mostly on relationships. So if that's something up your alley, feel free to give it a go. ^^

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Bestfriends to lovers my weaknesssss
gonna check out your other game too it's got me interested in knowing these characters!

I'll admit I'm also weak to this trope, it's so good 🤭 the main game is much darker though, so please proceed with caution! 🙏

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AKASJVBGKSAJBGAKSJFBK 

This made me squeal and smile and laugh like an idiot. The art and story are so cute, I hope we get to see them again some time!!! I hope they become boyfriends for real!! 💕💕💕

Also, the detail in the main menu with the click? *chef's kiss*

kdflskfslkfs I'm happy you liked it, Pri! 🥰

i'm more and more convinced about expanding it, i think it'd be fun 🤭 (tho it cracks me up that of all characters, Lawrence would be the one to get his own game 😂)

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Well, I think they will HAVE TO smooch, right? 🤔 (they might…)

WHO IS MILO?

They are the love interest from my main game, Quaint! 😊

ahh tanx

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MANLYBADASSHERO?????

Huh? Why…? 😅

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this was soooo cute😭😭😭😭🩷

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...This was the cutest and gayest thing I've ever played, and im so happy about it, bc this was amazing. Kinda short, but ignoring that, this is so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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gay panic after your friend touches your hair softly... been there... this was so cuteee

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agreed

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I played both versions and whoaaa it's really smart on how you solved the limitation!! :O I loved the enhanced version so much (so I understand the frustration that you had aaa) but the jam-compliance version is as cute, and it was really nice that you're able to pull it through!

Hiro's VNs are always so beautiful and lovely, I always enjoyed them all!! This one is super cute, I love the colours and the sprites are beautiful, the panning effect to show him laying down is really on point, I repeated it a few times, it's really good!!

Thank you for making this!! ^~^ I enjoyed it a lot.

Aaahhhh, thank you for the lovely words 🥺💕

Yess, the jam version is fine on its own, but once you play the extended build, there's no coming back, haha. But overall, I'm happy I could still make it work within the jam's rules. ✨

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This game was really inspiriting for a O2A2/Yaoi jam game. I loved how you used the one background but used it almost like two separate ones. The art is so nice and I loved the little animation when Lawrence went to lie on the bed. Also I liked how fat the fox was on the bed, so cute!

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sososoososso cute!!!! the only problem is too short>< hope one day you guys can tell full stories of these cp!!! love you!

Aww, thank you for playing! ✨ that seems to be the common sentiment in the comments haha ^^ one day, hopefully 🤞

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These guys have stolen my heart - this VN was so sweet and funny ahahaha! The panicked inner monologue was super entertaining, especially with Vale just chilling in the back there. Lawrence's angry eyes made me chuckle too. :P I want to see where this duo goes from here!!

You have a beautiful, polished visual style too. And the spinny menu is a treat! 

Simply delightful all-round!

Aww, thank you for the sweet words, this makes me very happy 🥰

I wonder how it might go for them, haha. They do have a fun dynamic and I'm definitely tempted to give them more screen time… 😏

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AYYY MAS LINDOS, LOS AMO

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that was so adorable, i was swooning over the hair stroking scene! I would love to see more of them, and from Vale's POV as well :D the thing on the main menu with switching their pics was cool too!

definitely considering to play the main game soon :)

Aww, I'm happy you liked it! I'm afraid Vale's POV would be less exciting (though probably cute, too!) 😊

To be fair, the main game has quite a different vibe but if you're in for romance, I hear it's pretty good ✨

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 really love it i wish it would be longer maybe something like "they date in real life kiss kiss end"

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that honestly sounds like a great scenario fklsdslfskd i can't promise anything, but i'd like to make it into something bigger in the future 😊

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You did really pull all the stops! 
I love how you rendered this short VN within the jam limitations! 
(I also read the devlog, but I think the O2A2 compliant version works just fine!)

Aw, thank you, Banya! Yeah, I think there's enough narration to make it work, it was just hard to let go of the vision I had 🥺 If I realized sooner, I would've done a completely different angle and spared myself the stress haha 😅

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